two is my everything.

two is my everything.

A Poem by Diane

They are my everything.
They are my life.
The sweet little nothings they 
whisper aren't alway nice.

They are my everything. 
They hold my heart.
Two little beings who have
torn my word apart.
From upside down to inside
out.

They are my life and I'm
 kind of theirs,
From the food fights in the 
kitchen to the cat fights down
 stairs.

They are my everything this I know 
for sure. Even when they are acting
like monsters I can't help but love 
them even more.

Bedtime is my favorite when they 
are tuckered as can be. The hugs the 
kisses clears it up for me. 

© 2016 Diane


Author's Note

Diane
Ignore grammar problems

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This is really sweet. I know you love those two more than anything. I can picture the little snapshots you sprinkled through this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


What a precious little poem, Diane! Your two little everythings are your world, and a pretty big part of mine. Love those girls so much.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thank took Wendy!
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such a sweet vanilla cream write..the most pure and unconditional love is mother's one only in this world..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
yep - that's what happens :D

a lovely devotional poem - love until you burst X

Posted 7 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Love your sweet poem. Imhave three grandboys and your loving words describe them so well. Good form and flow and rhyme. Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Grammar isn't the problem - an author having the confidence in his or her ability to express what they want to say is what needs to be driven. We are human, we have flaws - and gawd KNOWS "shyt" happens - to us ALL. We can learn to work WITH and ON our flaws as we correct perceptions (both ours and others).

I liked your thoughts and how they cascaded. You made them (your thoughts) personal.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thank you. That was a "drop the mic review!"
a cute write here liked this

Posted 8 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Oh thank you very much!
Awww!!! The joy of a mother's heart flowing through this poem... So beautifully written... The each and every activity of a child is something beautiful to his parents... Sweet and very well written work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

Thanks! You are so right on about children.
loved this cute feeling and experience:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Diane

7 Years Ago

thank you. The the feeling and experience keep coming.
Is the poem about kids . It was nice and every line in the poem shows of your love and how they mean everything to you.
It was a great one . Enjoyed reading

Posted 8 Years Ago


Diane

8 Years Ago

thank you for the review.

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My name is Diane Garner and I live in southeast Michigan with with my husband and two young daughters. I grew up in Gaylord, Michigan, with My mom and brother. I moved to the Detroit area in my late t.. more..

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