I Can Find The Lost

I Can Find The Lost

A Poem by Mr. Martinez

Everybody has the answer
even if their answer doesn't matter.

I am lost in a world of fairytales,
where they tell the tales of themselves 
that begins a never ending hell.

These feelings of humans makes me 
hate being human.

The feeling of greed is always 
in-between even when you don't see.

the feeling of lust is the ending of trust.

the feeling of worth is the worst when 
your last and not first.

the feeling of being accepted is believing 
a trend is your acceptance. 

© 2016 Mr. Martinez


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it is really good i feel like you just not so nicely. keep up doing good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


a nice job done here! keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr. Martinez

8 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed my piece. I will be posting daily so feel free to add me.
This poem is exquisite. "Everybody has the answer even if their answer doesn't matter." That stanza is my personal favourite! The piece flows, it's easy to read, and it makes you question things. I think it's very beautiful, keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr. Martinez

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I am going to start posting more so feel free to add me.

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Mr. Martinez

Southbridge, MA



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