I hide

I hide

A Poem by K.Ace.James
"

"

I hide what i feel.

I hide from the truth.

But i can't hide my love,

My love for you.

But this love is mixed with confussion.

So it is kinda hard to show yet,

Kinda hard to hide?

All this hidding causes me to cry.

Break down and shead a tear from time and again.

I hide the fact i fell in love with MY BEST FRIEND.

I hide from the truth.

I hide what i feel.

But baby i can't hide,

Hide what is real!

You see its' real, you know it is true.

But now the only one hidding ..

Is you.

© 2010 K.Ace.James


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This to me, was an extremely powerful piece, the emotion and message absolutely burst from each line. Check the spelling of the word "shed" on line 9 though.

^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

163 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on April 7, 2010
Last Updated on April 7, 2010

Author

K.Ace.James
K.Ace.James

wilmington, DE



About
Name: Keith Age:15 Born in:Philly Live in:Delaware relationship status:Taken more..

Writing
Life Life

A Poem by K.Ace.James


Haiti Haiti

A Poem by K.Ace.James