i'm alone

I'm alone sitting on this bed.

I'm alone only you in my head.

Whats going on,

What we could be.

How i feel for you.

And what you can NOT see.

You the the feelings are real.

You also know there true.

And when i hear the word LOVE.

I only think about YOU.

I cant help the feelings.

They just grow more and more each day.

I feel you know its true

so you just push me away.

To where I feel my back is on the wall.

And to make me feel like i have no where to turn.

I'm alone, yes it is true.

I'm alone because i'm not with YOU.</3

Reviews

[Shannon]

wow...just....wow.

I don't know what else to say, you are a much better writer than you realize. It takes skill to put that much emotion behind words, and have them conveyed to the reader with such force.

You may want to check line 7 for errors.

^_^