call for redemption

Between the "kill me" shrieks
Among the calls for a slay out
There's that meek SOS
The silent cry for redemption
I'm giving up..but I'd want you to fight for me
I'd want my rescue
I'd like to be free
Of all these voices .. fillng up my head
The hollow echoes.. looming over my being
Cussing my existence.. forcing me to beg for an end
I'd like a saviour.. to take away this sting
If I'd have a choice.. I'd give up the darkness
But I want someone to clear it for me
I've grown too weak to try..
Salvation..if any ..please be delivered
I'm losing my grip
Not too long now.. before the final meltdown ..before life's lashed by grim's final whip!

Reviews

[Aekmy]

This describes, in just a few simple lines, a very easily daunting emotion. Great job.

-Mary
God Bless

[Tanu]

Look carefully... There's someone standing beside you.. Who just can't see you in darkness.. And will do anything to bring you all the seven suns from heaven.. But it is so helpless a feel to stand here and have no clue as to what can assure you of the stability of this love we share .. All I can hence say is the cliche I love you.. But sis.. There is nothing else I am so sure of ... I just love you..