The Natural Beauty of Ocean Water

My love of nature...

Many have their descriptions of beautiful liquid

Transcribing the imagery of the ocean is breathe taking

Not the calm and motionless water as many display

But a lively Ocean that dances about like a child yearning for attention

Having cloud shadows reflect upon the canvas of waves

Experiencing seaweed tiptoeing  across the erratic surface

With the sky standing still, but is moving in a relax manner

Have a drink and admire God’s massive bathtub

Letting the soothing sounds of the aqua, wash away life’s stresses

Easing the mind into a reset of understanding

Sniffing in the breezes of the moisturized ocean air

Giving tremendous amounts of oxygen to the brain

Opening the mind to endless sensations of self-relaxation

Author's Note

I wrote this on my room's verandah during a seven day cruise. Please enjoy.

Reviews

[Mark]

Very nice! the ocean has always been a source of re-charging for me. Your words capture that experience very well.

[The 13th Eros]

An expression of the beautiful, powerful ocean and all the poignant life it has to breathe into us. I grew up near the ocean and I still hear its waves and wonders every day. So well written, my friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The ocean is the mother of all life and she may seem peaceful and quiet at times but she has her hurricanes and tidal waves that no man can alter...in that way, she is very much like a woman. I enjoyed this write.

[Jack...]

Very peaceful and calming was this piece. Nice job sir.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Your appreciation of 'lively ocean that dances..' is definite. ...'Opening the mind to endless sensations of self-relaxation...' is my favorite line.
Enjoyed.
~pat

[Tarry Franck]

This has to be may favorite from you by far. You did a wonderful job describing such a beautiful piece of our world. Bravo!!! Take a bow for this one.

[Junert]

It's nice.