We Shall... Dance: Stage 1

This is elegant way of expressing how to soul can meet, creating the prefect love at first sight.

Soft music is singing from the phonograph

Echoing throughout the hall

Raising a tingling to the ears

The body feels the vibrations of the notes

That beautiful soliloquy of sounds

Outlining the air waves with cheerful joy

 

The ballroom is decorated with pure linens

A shooting star is hanging from the ceiling

With crystals vibrating from every angle

Wax dripping from the candlelit wall sconces

As the lights slice through the ambiance

With a sunset characteristic

 

My back is straight and head up

Dressed in a white cravat and naval tailcoat

With fashionable trousers made from the skin of deer

Buckskin breeches accenting an entire Regency outfit

With shoes of gloss, gleaming

Clacking against the marble pavement

 

She is dressed in a lavish gown

With a beautiful pearl coated silk satin

Draped with a silk net,

Embroidered with gold metallic threads

Trimmed with blonde bobbin lace

And inner unbleached cotton, ivory skin shoes

 

The beauty that she exhibits

Touches the eye sockets

Bringing a smile to the memory

Of a glancing wanderer

The pupils pulsating from the glory of her

With a framework that pierces the heavens

 

The design of her beauty

Is like nectar to the essence

Saturating the belief of creation

As for I have dreamt of her suggestions

Of embellishing of my wanting

Because dancing with her will be a privilege

Author's Note

This is the same poem but the concept has changed, I'm sorry for all the wonderful reviews I received for this poem has been erase, please rewrite the if you can.

Reviews

[I, Rene]

The detail that went into describing the attire was borderline meticulous and lent admirably to the elegance that you were trying to capture of the night, it was most lovely.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Thank you, I wanted to paint a picture with words that will resonant my setting and background.

[I, Rene]

well you succeeded :) it was beautiful.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Please check the other two and let me know what you think, I creating a 10 part poetic story of romance.

[mikl paul]

this is eloquent. well done.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Thank you very much reading.

[Angel of Heart's]

What a beautiful ambiance your words create....the imagery was potent and powerful....the sensuality very tangible....What an amazing spiritual sensitive being you must be....this poem really hit home with me, it serenaded my soul and uplifted my heart......just so visual and beautiful....

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

I love romance and how it effect us, and these words are how I see it touching life as we now it.