Filling My Void of Universe

This piece was formed from reading and writing a review of Noodlehead's "Unlucky for Some". I always thought I was meant for a higher calling, please take time and read my poem, comment are welcome.

I have often exercised my curiosity of purpose

Having sleepless night of subterranean thought

Analyzing every vague memory of my existence

Dancing with the ideas of my belongings

To this vast, infinite cycle of life

Hoping to have my name splattered across the stars

“I feel that I’m meant for greatest”

 

But it is so hard to trudge my essence!

 

Traveling back and forward like a nomad

But with a sound perseverance of everlasting spirit

Touching every individual with smiles of love

Happiness and acceptance of my gifts

Which I share freely

Because my soul will not let me ponder on

Guiding me towards the inevitable progression

Of a higher mind state and understanding

 

Craving out a permanent seat in the cosmos

Warrant the keenest discipline of self

Embodying the vitalities of the surrounding

Breathing in the knowledge of my past self

Creating new genetic code of awareness, flesh and spirit

Passing that inherited material into the future

Cleansing the path for an immediate transference

Into my void of the universe

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This sounds like every great thinker, philosopher and poet who has ever written down a word. There is a loneliness and yearning to belong which follows greatness and intellect. But it is also those very feelings which indicate a path of aspiration. The whole nature of man is held in three letters...O...G...and D. In one form they spell DOG...if reversed they spell...GOD...and we are constantly striving between our animal and spiritual influences and between those two natures of dog and god. May we all learn to be more godlike and less bestial than our fellow four footed creatures.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Finding some form of impossible in this possible world separates us from the everyday animal that (excuse my language) eat, drink, s**t, and f**k - and there are some of us who match those four word exactly.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I try to explain to many people that there are riches of the soul and of the mind which transcend the body and its functions but many simply "just don't get it" Thoreau got it. Emerson got it. But there are many who only live to fulfill their desires for sex, food, drink, drugs, sleep, work, money, or fame. I believe to understand myself and my life is a far greater goal and certainly one worthy of my time and energy. Your expression of an equal sentiment is evidence of your desire to truly understand and not just blindly accept everything as it seems. I really appreciate that mentality. And words are simply words to me...they express the things they are meant to express or they are poor word choices. That's what being a good writer is all about. Bless.

[ErosNthanatos]

In order to be one of the greatest or considered to be closed to one,
One then had to look back the trail of greatness.
For it's the markings and footsteps left in the earth,
that engraved their names in existence
and brightens the cosmos like evening stars.

[Mercedes Caridad Sanche..]

Very very well done, It's nice to read a piece of writing and being able to actually feel like you're are connecting with the writer

[Allan W]

Ah.......The intorspective self detective? The self forensic! I love the topics and content you write about. You always ask big questions and show deep thought in your poetry. Very revealing, thought provoking and well written! :)

[The 13th Eros]

You have a fierce strength that glances deep within your soul and your place in this world, as well as gazing out into the vastness of space. There is an honesty to claim both reason and destiny, and merge them into a place of peace. Keep standing strong. Wherever you are, there can be no void.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

I must say you've got talent.This was effortless!

[char]

This is extremely deep and well written. Your word usage compliments what you are trying to say. This write also makes you think; it's very philosophical and powerful. Excellent work.

[Junert]

This is deep. Strong emotions and a stronger need of understanding one's existence.

[scripted]

WOW!!! Your word usage was great. I thought that this piece was very well penned. I love your longing to become something more than ordinary. Nice job! Thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[Angel of Heart's]

Wow!....reading your thoughts and ideologies over and over again....I am reminded of The Buddha....and the disciplines he embarked upon to attain enlightenment....
you have such an amazing gift of writing the voice of your heart in the ink of your soul........:)

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Thank you so very much, for to compare anything I write to Buddha is breathtaking, I am truly speechless. Thank you again.

[Una Xoto]

Ah my friend I must say thank you. I have not read anything so finely crafted in a bit of time. You are a fine scribbler. Look forward to reading more.

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy, Jr]

Thank you Una, I love writing and expressing my thoughts with words.