Bathory Queen

She sits on her throne 
And looks out across her kingdom
The wicked world of thornes 
Bitted and Twisted 
Like her view of people 
High above us all 

She sits on her throne 
And looks across her mess 
A proud job she did
But not all alone
Her partner and slave 
To have abd to hold 
That’s what he thinks 

She sits on her throne 
And watches her sibjects 
As they try to Survive 
Sp she can play judge
In her fair way
To find them guilty 
For her crimes

Reviews

[lifesmith]

haven't we all at one time? sitting high on our thrones judging the "lowly" people that just can't for the life of them be "as high up as we are"

this poem kinda makes me feel guilty of my past grimes...mirror mirror on the wall...

[Phi Coulthard]

Sorry I didn't check for typos when putting it in. I just copied it straight from my Facebook Group

Cheers for pointing that out V.

[V.B.]

In the event that you care, there are a number of typos here you may want to fix. "Abd" for "and" and "sibjects" for "subjects," for example.

That aside, I like the last two lines a lot. Interesting (and scary) concept to sit in judgment of others for one's own indiscretions.