My Fight

This is a poem about my first REAL fight. this happened yesterday night....

       Dear Stranger, You don't scare me anymore

Dear Keeper, All my secrets have led their way out

Dear Murderer, Im in Pain.. but haters make me stronger

You came up to me and said you're stronger than me

You made a horrible  mistake

Untill i fell to the ground

The ice cold Ground

You took your sharp nails and cut my hand and thighs

But  i realized that you were a hater

And that made me stronger

When i pushed you off

i was bleeding

i ran after you

I failed

You punched me and i kicked you

More people came

I felt scared

i forgot that i had something sharp in my pocket

I took that sharp object and sliced everyone in the arm and chest

i felt good

as your friends were on the ground and told to run

you run but i ran after you

i jumped on you

i kept punching you till you were bleeding alot

and i took the sharp object and stabbed you with i in the hip

how does it feel?

good huh?

good thing we were alone

or i would be in jail by now

when you were outcold i made a statement 

a statement that is my motto

"one who cannot achieve will be the one to suffer." 

Reviews

[Kat]

I think this is good ^^ You described it well but this was a real fight? Wow

[Emunah June.]

Choppily written, but overall a good message.

[~* Darkness Light *~]

lol thnxx, in this world you cant just walk away or else they'll chase after yolu and punch you in the face. i have a scar from walking away. and i regret it. and thnxx again for the review!!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem..Fighting is never a good thing, but haters are going to hate. They always do and they are all stupid. I hate people like them. Haters need to learn their place in the world. And their "place" is the bottom. I loved this though. This was awesome. I loved the quote at the end. Thanks for sharing. :)