petrified heart

petrified heart

A Poem by mournful bear


petrified heart of gray, eyes of black, nothing left to betray, no shadow to cast. all lost in a flash. locked in a catacomb of dreaded memories. no splinters of light to end these forgettable miseries.  Ahead is not for us unloading the burden will ease your path leave it where it lay. selfless acts will not be recognized at times like these. only the strong trample meek. don't forget your future "withhold emotion it is a futile necessity only meant to debilitate, one distant abysmal memory will surface a familiar thought that was lost with contrivance." Use me as anchor cut the tether and let me drown. slowly descend, I will no longer be visible from the surface; YOU, my last glance. Here no one remembers build me no marker, I seek solitude. no cenotaph in your heart.  Bring no priest, Play no strings, say no words, shed no tears, let me rest, make it rain, lose the stone, pile the earth and walk away. Leave no flowers nor peddles, forget this day for all eternity. And I shall rise when the time comes, I shall see the light dim as it may be squinting. I will be found yet not saved. Out of the filth rinsed with autumn rains all sins drain to where they came from pieces of you go along

© 2017 mournful bear


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Pax
a downpour of emotions... i like it...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mournful bear

7 Years Ago

they always pour out like that, sometimes in public as well. thanks for you time.
Emotive eloquence!--indeed, elegance.
A decidedly unique offering.
Extraordinary!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mournful bear

7 Years Ago

tried to be elegant and demure, thanks for read have a good mourning!!
Incredibly moving, beautifully written. Steeped with emotion.
A very good poem. At first glance I didn't like the format but as I read it, it just flowed perfectly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mournful bear

9 Years Ago

thank you for you words. i wrote this years ago after the parting i was very emotional, thats the on.. read more
Ana D S M

9 Years Ago

Absolutely agree. You're welcome. :)
This is moving, MB. I understand that in life we experience pain and miseries that deadened out hearts.
Hope that "you shall rise when the time comes..."

Nice piece. Keep going.


Posted 10 Years Ago


A splendid read and write. So many good lines in here...Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mournful bear

11 Years Ago

thank you for taking the time to read my mournfulbearness.
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Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
your words remind me of another bear, his heart was full of storms

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mournful bear

11 Years Ago

thank you so moooch for taking the time to read my sorrowships. I'm pretty sure the bear that I remi.. read more

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Added on November 26, 2012
Last Updated on May 31, 2017
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had a love now gone. awaken to the lonesomeness that solitude brings. no friends, no hikes, no job, no, no girl... this the mournful outdoors guy am i. family can be the splinter that you can never g.. more..

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