This Woman and This Man

 

This woman and this man...
softly breathing against one another's skin

Gently caressing without even guessing...
what would come next

Rough but gentle___ 

    Somewhere in the middle___

           Somewhere underneath___

                         From the tip-tops___

                             Down to the toes___

                              Finger tips and elbows___

 

Cold feet soon turn warm to the touch...
the power of love flows

Our bodies embrace, we sweat, we deeply breathe, hearts beat!


This woman and this man...
never wanting for this to ever end

Thief time steals away the night as we lie together sleeping...
so we wake and wish for the next time
 

 

Reviews

[Tony Hwilka]

Short, but enjoyable

[Jwana Creer Yeshua]

I love this poem. I like how the peom is set up. Everything just flows together. Great Write! I will be looking for more poems in the near future.

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua

[Lady leah]

Very nice, great write.

[Joseph - Michael]

Very nice and very tempting piece you've made... It may be a bit short, yet it sure got a real strong hint of sensuality...

So, it's all still great tho...

[Bexers]

I really enjoyed this.
I like how you broke it down, it made it all that more interesting to read.
Good job, keep it up!