"Really" feel the rain

a descriptive poetic approach to the feeling of rain

Walking down a long pathway....

seems as though dusk is taking over.

 

Cold wet tiny sprinkles begin to fall upon

my skin ever so gently....

chill bumps appear all over.

 

Feels so refreshing.....

smells like a blessing,

seems as though showers of joy are taking over.

Reviews

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hmm.. the emotion in here...well its pleasure without a reason for me... nature is just so wonderful... rains can mean so much.. when in pain.. i feel like the heavens are crying with me.. and when happy it feels like its showering bliss...
i love the beginning..and the scene created by you...
the drizzling rain gods are so very special..and personally something that my buddy is crazy about... just mention it raining..and he gets this cute smile... lol..(why am i writing this here :p )

anyways... love rains..love your poem...

take care and keep smiling.. :)
niki.. :)

[Kit-Kat]

Lovely write. Thanks for entering my contest.

[Angel's Lady]

Feels so refreshing.....
smells like a blessing, -- Ain't that the truth!? PERFECT!

I like this...

[Angel's Lady]

Feels so refreshing.....
smells like a blessing, -- Ain't that the truth!? PERFECT!

I like this...

[Angel's Lady]

Feels so refreshing.....
smells like a blessing, -- Ain't that the truth!? PERFECT!

I like this...

[Joseph - Michael]

It reminded me so much of the few times when I walk through hot and humid weather and it felt like a soft rain was on the way, but it was only the winds that made everything felt like light raining

Anyway, it's a really nice writing you got there...

[forfila]

I love this, so simplistic and so sweet, I understand it too =)

Beautiful little "Rain" poem

Love it

Me