Oblivion

The human brain is an amazing place,
Some things we remember, others we erase.
We make one tiny mistake,
And suddenly everything is at stake.

You just don't get it, do you?
You're so oblivious with everything you do.
You don't even realize you're scared,
And you just leave me standing there.

I sit here and wonder why,
When you used to be so kind.
In all this chaos and oblivion,
We just sit here and wonder, yet again.

And in this never-ending sea,
I still wonder about you and me.
You make me smile and laugh,
But eventually it will all pass.

It will all just pass me by,
And when we are at an all-time high,
We crash back down again.
I sometimes wonder if you're still my friend.

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Just like nature, human beings live for chaos. Even when things are going well, people will look for slight mistakes and blow them out of proportion to breed drama. I've often found myself trying to do these things, but then I stop myself, because the spice is not worth the aftertaste. I like that you actually try to rhyme unlike so many writers today who completely disregard the old style. In line 7 your should be changed to you're but this is the only mistake I see. Good writing my friend