Pall's Poem from Sarah's Spaceship Adventure

Pall's Poem from Sarah's Spaceship Adventure

A Poem by Stan
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Sarah and Pall play a game of ruffgreen. They make a bet. If Pall loses the game, he must write a poem

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I don’t pretend that I know a lot

About the world in which you slide.

It’s hard to speak to people, you know,

I’d rather go spacing and hide.

 

But I see that it makes you happy

To hang out with a group.

And I know you never mind

When the group becomes a troop.

 

So I stay by your side and wait to see

If your eyes will turn to me.

 

© 2013 Stan


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Beautiful, loved it. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work fella..................
i llllikkked it...........

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such tension and disparity of both internal & societal poles that wreak havoc in interpersonal relationships. In spite of the sad background this poem shines with a devotion and faithfulness. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel a sting of sadness. Social anxiety, the differences between two people, watching someone from afar... Forever longing, ha Cheers

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stan

11 Years Ago

Until I read it separate from the book it's in, I had no idea it was so close to being autobiographa.. read more

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Added on July 7, 2012
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Tags: Stan Morris, Pall's Poem, Sarah's Spaceship Adventure, Science Fiction, Romance

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Stan
Stan

Kula, HI



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Speculative Fiction writer. Born and raised in California, Educated and married in New Mexico, Lived in Texas before moving to Maui, Hawaii. Operated a computer assembly and repair business before r.. more..

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