Kiss Goodbye

Kiss Goodbye

 

Noose,

I'm cutting you tonight.

Kiss goodbye

To my friend you knew tonight

Ill do the honors

Just let me lay by his side

Don't.

Cause me to bleed tonight

For the second time.

 

I don't care what tomorrow brings

I'm hoping I'll fall asleep

Dreams of you awaiting

But there's no peace in my heart aching

 

Cut.

I cut myself to die.

Along with you

Sanguinary skin tonight

You're all I needed

In this lifetime

Suicide,

I'm giving in

Tonight

To be with him

 

I don't care what tomorrow brings

I'm hoping I'll fall asleep

Dreams of you awaiting

But there's no peace in my heart aching

 

I chose

To never wake again

Comatose,

While the blood flow never ends

Living on without you, I can't

No kiss goodbye

You're not alone tonight,

No kiss goodbye.

Author's Note

I cried a little when making this poem. It's kind of personal..

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Fantastically dark great imagery and defiantly appeals to me great use of vocabulary and still the hint of lyrical vibe which you produce so well
loved this thank you for trying something new you done really well and showed your skill as a writer x x x x x x

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

A little heartbreaking masterpiece you have here... Utterly beautiful in its every little sad way. Ah-mazing.

[A]

this is so sad, it was really heart-breaking... great expressions and vocab
I think it can be a song lyrics as well, amazing piece, keep it up.

[Disillusioned]

I cried a little when reading this poem. It hit me kind of personal, too. It's good work, palpable and resonating.

[Jesi]

Did you write this as a poem or song? Because i think that was amazing as a song. You did a good choice of words too. I absolutly love it.

[Beth Wilcox]

This was entierly amazing. I could really feel the emotion through your words and I could tell that this meant something to you and had personal reasoning behind it. It was a wonderful poem. I really, really enjoyed reading it. This poem was so powerful and moving.. I love it. I also like that I can relate to it as well. I have been there and done all of that and felt like it's the end. Love is tough. I'm sure that many other teens and people can relate to this.

[Dilan Gray]

This gave me goosebumps, it was so beautiful and the images were so powerful. Great poem.

[Mickey Hyde]

This was heartbreakingly amazing. I really loved it, you did a great job capturing each emotion so well. I loved it. Keep writing, I'd love to read more ;)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. I thought it was really nice...it made me feel better for some reason....but it's probably cause something bad happened...anyways good job on this poem. Thanks for sharing. :)