Who Are You Kidding?

This I wrote because of some people at my school that were really getting on my nerves. It was just me venting, so I hope no one gets offended :/

When I pass you by

You just seem so shy

Full of innocence

Makes me want to

Take

Out

Those

Lies

Bye bye halo

Hello horns

Make you dress like

The person you really are

You

Don't

Fool me.

 

And I

Can see right through you

And we

Know all the things you do

In this world

You can not last

Cause somebody's

Gonna kill your kiss A--

 

Law abiding citizen

(Please)

You're the opposite

Thinking everyone's so jealous

(When)

Really we're over it

Cut the crap, you're a rebel

And no one

Finds it adorable

Be the normal you do what you normally do

 

Cause I

Can see right through you

And we

Know all the things you do

In this world

You can not last

Cause somebody's

Gonna kill your kiss A--

 

Who do you think I am

Stupid's not on my forehead

Sweetie you're just fakin

Everybody knows it

Under all your preppy

Dresses, skirts you're empty

Look at you, so bitchy

Abercrombie and fitchy

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaa

 

Cause I

Can see right through you

And we

Know all the things you do

In this world

You can not last

Cause somebody's

Gonna kill your kiss A--

Reviews

[Dilan Gray]

I really like this, I love the emotion. I like ranting poems, I do them sometimes too, they can really help and I'm guessing this one helped you a little. I love everything about it. It's awesome!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Loved the structure of this one separating each word at the start really makes them full of emotion and it hits you hard loved the repetitiveness of your chorus was another well written piece would love for you to write about something really dark well done Asia x x x x x x x x

[Day's-eye]

My favorite lines are "Make you dress like/The person you really are"

This is the kind of topic than everyne can relate to because we've all known people like this at school or at work.

[Meat of Dog]

This was a very good read. I left school a few years ago (in 08) and still this reminds me vividly what people were like. I felt like the narrator of this poem as a child all the time. My favorite line was "In this world, You can not last, Cause somebody's, Gonna kill your kiss" I felt the imagery was very vivid. Also, this felt very lyrical (with the repeating chorus type stanzas)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

this was just GREAT!

[*]

I can see this being a song indeed! I don't see how anyone can get offended by this, well maybe the person you're writing it about but I'm sure everyone has felt this way towards another person a time or two in their life. This poem is really good and I love the raw emotion you put into it. Great piece here!

[Amanda_Rose]

is this a song? it's good i can see it being sung by some angry girl band haha. girls are always gunna be bitchy. dont worry, once your out of school or in college youll care less about b*****s, trust me