Middle Ground

Middle Ground

There was a time, 

A time, where limits were crossed.

A time of excess.

Overabundance of guilt,

Overabundance of disgust,

Overabundance of hopelessness.

A time of pain.

Sharp.

A torture, a blow,

Down to the deepest core of my soul.

Suffering that I, can only control.

No more regrets.

No more sorrows.

Only strength.

A place to get better.

A middle ground to find.

Reviews

[Chris]

Well when spoken, good rhythm and tone.
And a taste of real - after being read.

[Morgane Soustre]

Thanks for the corrections.

[Chris]

you took the time to make them... so I took the time to remove their need from my comment.

[Holly Mason]

middle ground very important thank you for sharing

[Morgane Soustre]

Life is all about it. It's not easy to find it but it's necessary, be grounded to keep going

[Chaos_Collector]

A middle ground to me almost seems like finding balance in one's life. This part of the poem has truly captivated me "A time of pain.
Sharp.
A torture, a blow,
Down to the deepest core of my soul.
Suffering that I, can only control." This is some fine diction. Great work

Chaos_Collector

[Morgane Soustre]

Thank you. You're right. It's all about find a balance, an in-between, choas and calm

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome :)

Chaos_Collector