Long Country Roads

Just us two

on this dark summer night

heading down a long country road.

just us two, not a care in the world

hand in hand,

barely focused on whats ahead

wanting each other

shifting lanes because of distractions

 

only ones around

on this long country road

me and you, you and me

side by side, hand in hand

egerly exploring

egerly distracting

wanting the other

 

Moon shining bright,

your lips touch mine

you smile at me, i smile right back

I dont want this night to end

on this long country road

 

laughing and smiling

wanting and lusting

you want me, i want you

on this long country road

 

The dark of the night

the heat of the summer

the feeling of love

all on this long country road

 

Author's Note

ignore spelling/grammer

Reviews

[Tony]

You create a sultry an intimate atmosphere and the “long country road” line works well to create that infinite night or that loss of time feeling one has during high moments of passion. Oh yes-- and the “shifting lanes because of distractions” made me smile.

[Kelley]

Very romantic in child like wonder that never ends.
I like how you used a country road as your back drop
for you romantic get a way.

Thanks for sharing Morgan

[Annie N.]

'only ones around
on this long country road
me and you, you and me
side by side, hand in hand'
amazing lines. excellent write! thanks for sharing :) would u read and review some of my stuff too?? lol XD

[Samuel Dickens]

Even though it was long ago, I remember driving those country roads with my date just like you describe. Thanks for reminding me of it.

[Antonio Valentino]

Ahh yes, the days before we had our own cribs... but then taking a nice long drive with your sweetie never stops being fun.

An innocent and fun write.
Antonio :)

[J.S. Pua]

I kind of like the repetition too..
good write..

[The Analog Kid]

I like the repitition. We all know the feeling of trying to find a place to be alone. You did a decent job of imagery of the beauty of the "backroads."