Wrecked

another poem about the wreck..

Tires screeching.

the world is spinning.

the sudden halt.

glass shatters.

metal bends.

her gut wrenching screams.

tears falling.

heart racing.

doors jammed.

cant get out.

terror in her eyes.

blood trickling.

a screw punctures.

people running.

sirens blareing.

a mothers crys.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kira]

It seems like it was written from experience, and the colors of the font develop it beyond the words. The spelling errors detract from the fluidity of the piece, but those could be easily fixed.