kiss of death

it stopped my heart

i was losing my breath

little did i know

it was the kiss of death

 

you tricked me into it

when it was least expected

my body turned cold

your poison had been injected

 

your lips left mine

from the tragic kiss goodbye

my eyes started to close

it was leading to my demise

 

i became your prey

falling into your trap

i thought you were the treasure

to my secretly lost map

 

your hand left mine

i lost your deadly touch

who ever would've guessed

love could hurt this much?

 

your fingers ran down my face

blue-tinted like ice

it was as if you played me

like a game with hidden dice

 

you whispered "i love you"

one last time into my ear

it made my heart stop

you knew it's exactly what i wanted to hear

 

then my heart froze

my blood as cold as your heart

"i love you too" i said

i have from the start

 

you'll always be with me

though you lied under your breath

you told me you loved me

after you gave me the kiss of death

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

This is a beautiful story. It has good stucture, imagery and emotion. I like when you said lost treasure to a hidden map. That is original. Good write.