surrounded

surrounded by fear

drowned in hopes

surrouned by jealousy

that's hung by a rope.



surrounded in pain

with no way out

surrounded in tears

there is no doubt.



surrounded by dreams

covered in sin

surrounded with knowing

there's no way to win.



surrounded in life

with nothing to do

surrounded by lies

which none are true.



surrounded by wishes

caught in false beliefs

surrounded by you

who caused the leave.



surrounded by surrendering

where no one even tries

surrounded by surrender

behind these lonely eyes

Reviews

[Alicia Isabella Lane]

Wow I could feel the hopelessness, desolation, and despair in this piece so emotional and intense. A truly awesome write!!!