Untitled Drabble

Untitled Drabble

A Poem by Ashley N.G.
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Honestly, this is what happens when I just write without thinking about it.

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Slowing fading
waterfalls.
Unheard confessions
hidden deep.
Beating hearts
grow weak.
Blank faces
show themselves.
The lights are bright
they’re too much.
Broken shells.
Cracked armor.
Descending letters
dropping fast
onto pale fibers.
Absorb the ink
needy fool.
Drowning.
Slip beneath
the silken sheet.
Return
never.

© 2008 Ashley N.G.


Author's Note

Ashley N.G.
It probably doesn't make any sense. The unconscious mind is mysterious.

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Memories fade and voices rise as we turn to dust... You are profound in your unconscious mystery! Love the brilliance of your free form.

Posted 15 Years Ago


sure it makes sense and wonderfully written

Drowning.
Slip beneath
the silken sheet.
Return
never.

espceially these lines right here. It' saying you're drowning and you don't want to come back up.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 8, 2008

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Ashley N.G.
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I'm Ashley and I'm 19. I'm a psychology major. Randomness defines my life. I like writing poetry, lyrics, and the occasional angst-filled short story. That doesn't mean it's good. I just write what I .. more..

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