The End

just a quick poem for practice,been awhile.

The end has arrived

We tried the best we can

begged,pleaded

open your minds

but alas we claim defeat

all will perish under their feet

all will gone

no freedom is strong

Once again it all falls

Once again most human trace erased

The circle will begin again

always the same fate

live,die,repeat

Reviews

[MOON]

Good write , you meant Alas , I think.

[Summer R]

Thankyou,,yes i did. i really need to to watch my spelling. Sometimes i type way to fast and get ahead of my own thinking.

[Summer R]

Thanks,yea i love to write but cant spell the greatest,lol.

[KeeD]

Hi, you definitely display the cycle of existence. I love how raw and passionate the words are, very expressive.
small edit:
all will parish under their feet
I think you meant to type perish.
Great writing, i'm a fan of your style.