want

want

A Poem by moosicphreak

i want to be wanted.

 

i want you to care when i'm not there.

i want you to see what's bothering me.

i want to talk to you face to face, not on the phone or through myspace.

 

did i make a difference in your life?

do i matter, or at least deserve your respect?

are you even worth the time?

 

i want one girl.

i want real friends.

i want to stay home.

 

does that make sense?

is that what i should want?

does it make a difference?

 

 

© 2008 moosicphreak


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Hmmm. This is something that I think we all want, all need. Such simple desires, yet people spend life times trying to gain them... I really enjoyed this, I loved the simplicity of it as well as the fact that it does relate to everyone... I really loved the lines "i want you to care when i'm not there./ i want to you to see what's bothering me." Thoughts along those lines have been running through my head as of late in particular... Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hmmm. This is something that I think we all want, all need. Such simple desires, yet people spend life times trying to gain them... I really enjoyed this, I loved the simplicity of it as well as the fact that it does relate to everyone... I really loved the lines "i want you to care when i'm not there./ i want to you to see what's bothering me." Thoughts along those lines have been running through my head as of late in particular... Great work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 17, 2008
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