short verse.

lennon-esque

 

Broaden your back

and lower your brow
It’s best not to think
when you’re pushing the plow

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Wonderful! The simplicity of this is awesome and the imagery is great. I love the flow and the rhythm of this piece. Well done.

[Chahklat]

Quite Witty.
Its hard to put so much thought into 4 lines, but
you did it.

[Rambling Prose]

Short - sweet - and to the point! I agree in that it would not be a good idea to think while pushing the plow!

Enjoyed this verse...