3:48

 

Laying in the dark of dawn

Going away

Trying my best to leave this place

Fording a stream of sound

Rhythm and wind

Rhyme and a slowing current

I follow the eddies

Created and caressed

By the harmonies

In my head

Reviews

[Victoria Emily]

I don't know why I picked this one to read, but I'm glad that I did. It's simplicity makes it provocative, and while it's simplistic, the imagery is strong and beautiful. On a completely different note, "caressed" is one of my favorite verbs, so you get thumbs up for using it. All in all, great work. Very enjoyable.

[Blackbirdsong]

This is a lovely evocative read, the title drew me in and I'm still not clear what it means besides perhaps the time. It doesn't really matter since the poem is really well done. Is this a dream or a reality or combination of both as in magical reality? It doesn't matter, the dreamy quality of this read works really well.

Also welcome to the cafe :)