Prologue

Preface: Forced into Darkness

"Hello..."?

He stares into the darkness. there is no response no movement no anything in fact its just the opposite 

not just darkness but the complete absence of any stimuli this place is completely devoid of all life, color and, and

anything, all there is here is him and his thoughts to keep him company most would have goon insane or otherwise

given up lost themselves to the darkness surrendered there consciousness quite their mind until they are in one with the darkness to the point that their mind becomes indistinguishable from the surrounding darkness, but he is different he continues on through the darkness he has a purpose he will continue to yell and scream into the abyss untill he recives his reply.

"Beep"

a shrill high pitched sound pierce the abyss

"beep beep beep"

the sound returns in quick succession

"Hello... who's there?" 

during all his time in the dark never has he experienced out side stimuli.

"doctor the patients heart rate is raising"

a high strained voice cry's out. words not just sounds but full word from the outside and there is something else the darkness is receding? he isn't sure but he knows that this is different something is changing.

"Alpha and Beta brain waves are in flux sir he is waking up"

this voice is deeper a man? 

"its not time put him under. Sedate him."

a third voice deep and authoritative definitely a man is that the doctor? wait he remembers the word forms in his mind is shape its texture 'sedate', sedate, sedate sedate means dark

"arrgh NO"

This new voice is different it sounds rough and strained more like a shrill than a shout

"Quickly he needs to be put down"

slowly he becomes aware of his limbs and extremity's first his fingers and toes than his arms and legs. he tries to open his eyes but they wont move they are stuck and stiff. with his new found body the boy comes up with a plan a plan that will allow him to not be forced into darkness. he summons all of his strength and swings his arm over his torso. now he is moving, moving down the word rises into his mind. He thinks that he may not have had thought this through it feels as if he left half of himself up there. he falls for what fells like far to long

he has prepared himself for a collision but instead had been met with more falling.

"how's he doing this?"

the first voice calls out again

"D****t i said sedate him"

the third voice calls out again cutting through the voices of shock, confusion and the random noises of the room.

He feels a prick in his arm and quickly he finds himself once again claimed by the darkness. 

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Really great beginning! I think this has potential but there were lots of grammar and typo mistakes. Just simple stuff like capitalization and punctuation.
Really awesome though!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Mr New Writer]

Hey thanks, sorry about the grammar and spelling that's a massive problem I have sometimes I'm in such a hurry to get my ideas down I miss stuff like that. Its only early in the process I hope to review and fix those sort of errors before posting my next chapter!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Its great! Just slow down and look over before you post it. Really awesome!