Outside the Snow

Outside the Snow

A Poem by Bo Lanier

Breath on my window silently screaming out for a certain Scorpio but it's like you've just disappeared like a ghost in the blinding snow the fire here inside is warm but I feel a chill craving your hot, hot lovin', starvin' for the ecstasy in your kisses and in your hands well the passion floods my soul and curls my toes... but here it is half past 2 and I'm still waiting, waiting and waiting, texting, texting and texting you oh Lord I need to see you again 'cuz surely you're not so far away you can't cross the frozen river and swim the snow but your cellphone seems to be off tonight and it's just driving me crazy wondering if you're holding someone else in your arms so warm and tight but I pray for your sake you’re not if you value your life... can't you hear me silently screaming out for you like a banshee’s echo across the frozen river... OUTSIDE THE SNOW... OUTSIDE THE SNOW...

© 2016 Bo Lanier


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The long, accentuated sentences suggest thought upon thought upon thought. Your need and sadness seems to have taken over reason... and,. gradually, without realising it, your life is becoming as cold as the weather beyond. Perhaps.

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Added on November 12, 2016
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Bo Lanier
Bo Lanier

Chattanooga, TN



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Bo Lanier resides from Chattanooga, Tennessee and has become an established poet with over twenty years of experience. He has received several achievement awards in creative writing throughout the ye.. more..

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