Lover's Lie

Lover's Lie

A Poem by Bo Lanier

Rain in my heart, tear in my eye

Another hello, another goodbye

Well why I even try me only

Get my hurt every time

Somebody always breaks this

Heart of mine

But I thought you were different

When you said you loved me

Where are the reasons you ran

Fire hot and turned icy cold

Why you took me up so high

And let me down so low

Well I try not to let my sorrow

Show but I know everybody

Knows now as the rain falls from

The sky so do the tears from my

Eyes well it was just another

Hello, another goodbye...

Lover's Lie, Lover’s Lie

© 2015 Bo Lanier


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Love it! So relatable! I got kind of confused with the part "Well why I even try me only" I understand what you are saying but it just seems like you could make it flow better, I had to read it twice and keep reading to get what you were saying. I would use different syntax there!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Bo Lanier
Bo Lanier

Chattanooga, TN



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Bo Lanier resides from Chattanooga, Tennessee and has become an established poet with over twenty years of experience. He has received several achievement awards in creative writing throughout the ye.. more..

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A Poem by Bo Lanier