The One.

Your lips are the softest pillows
my troubles have laid upon,
and your mind is a spiral of love.
You are the one I was waiting for.
               You are the one.

Reviews

[Yes]

I'm going to be completely honest with you here. I think this is beautiful and well-written, but rather short. I understand your magnificent use of symbolism, but I think you could elaborate on this piece much more. Currently, it offers a one-sided look at love, saying that nothing could go wrong and your lover understands /all/ your troubles and worries. In "reality" there is much, much more to love and affection.

[Kelley]

Beautifully written I like the words
you chose to show how you feel.

Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Dimples87]

Wow, this poem says so much in a short piece. It shows the power of words and how they can evoke so much emotion from you. 'The One' definitely says it all.

[turtlegirlluver]

I love this, it's short, but has so much emotion and imagery in it! I love the first two lines, and the realization of the last line that they are the one you have been waiting for. Great job!

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Beautiful piece
'The One', as you say, is so hard to find
And if you've found yours, then you're lucky
Well done!

[lindsay]

Sometimes short and simply can mean much more than lengthly and complicated.
It brings a smile to my face =]
The beauty of love.

[Flo_writer]

Simply passionate. Your very expressive...

"Your lips are the softest pillows
my troubles have laid upon"

beautiful line.