Ai Yume nikushimi

About a vampire, a dream and unrequited love and unending hate. should be read in a sing-song fasion.

I remember, dreaming of a face

in a dark and disterbing place

Hair so silken, eyes of gold

lips of ruby, skin so cold

Rising up from the dead

into my life, you were led

With a sweet sighing sound

in my love, forever be bound

 

Fading in the cool September rain

are my tears, and a repeating refain

"Please forgive me, I will sin."

killing all your kith and kin

This is how our love began

and you became more than man

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[AmeliaRose]

i like this poem a lot, the title is pretty and the verses fit well with a song. bravo!

[Display Name]

I hope you follow this poem up with more explanation and creative verse

[bailish]

Sounds like you're falling in love with a corpse. Could this be the start of a zombie story? I wonder.