4 words

Gerrad...

4 words

Asking a simple question
Hurt so bad
Asking if you'd miss me
Never knew it would back fire

Loved you, still do
But why must you cause me
Pain?
Do you not see how I hurt?
Do you not care?

But the your answer cut the deepest
Only four words
'I won't miss you'

Author's Note

This happened today and he kept asking what's wrong...

Reviews

[stars are far]

this is very touching and hurting i felt the same in my life and i was so bad
great work :)

[whispereversolightly]

hearttugging and so emotional. Such deepness & sadness in your words.

[GreenSkeleton16]

this is really deep. it remind me of a song called Enta Eih. its in arabic but they have the lyrics on myspace and the lyrics remind me of what your saying. You should check it out cause i see you like music. lol :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wae5Vm2EuMA

[Thomas Roarty]

I really liked this. The shortness of the piece really conveys the sharpness of the topic, it's like the blade of an axe. Clean-cut and efficiently painful. :)

[*Evelen*]

This was an amazing right. Powerful and painful. Well done.

[Adam :P]

wow really hurtful and good. good poem

[Alexanne Dauntless]

Short, but tragic. I was sad to read this, beautiful thought it was.

[Kena]

Stupid butthole, Gerrad. He doesn't even know what made you sad. I'll talk to him about it.

[YouoweYoupay]

the only correction here is your tenth line where you typed:

But the your answer cut the deepest -be careful, typos.

It was a short poem, but I could feel your pain. I've been through this s**t and it ain't one bit pleasant. I'm so sorry =/ *hugs you*!!

-Wella.