Dad

Dad

A Poem by Revenge<3'sMe
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My sister wrote this poem, not me.

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DAD

I remember you.
You kept balance in my life.
Strong, funny, loving.
Made me smile no matter what.
Old age wasn't a suspect.
The signs developed.
Nothing made it easy.
Death on his way, I said goodbye.
Never to forget.

© 2010 Revenge<3'sMe


Author's Note

Revenge<3'sMe
My older sister wrote this for our dad, comments be kind. :)

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Amazing
i loved that :) wish you good luck :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful words for a wonderful relation!

Posted 14 Years Ago


We all can clearly see how much your dad meant to you guys. Touching write. I wish you the best :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it I cannot but see thew value placed on your father and Im all for that

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww...thats so sad. I know its not really the same, my ferret died 2 days ago and I was grief stricken.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great poem
the shortness of it makes it that much more meaningful
I could imagine it as a little something you would recite to yourself just to remember him
Very powerful poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short and simple - yet I could feel the emotion behind it
Last 2 lines made me sort of sad


Posted 14 Years Ago


Saddened.. Kristen wrote this, or one of the other sisters? Tell them I said well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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