What is wrong?

What is wrong?

A Poem by Revenge<3'sMe
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Just the truth.

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What is wrong?

What’s wrong?
People ask that all the time
What response do they get?
Nothing, why do you ask?


And you know this is a lie

Everything is wrong
People, the world, life itself

Everything is wrong


But yet somehow it’s all right
People may hate but they also love
The world may be corrupt yet perfect
And life is wonderful cause you can love


Next time people ask
What’s wrong?
Here’s what you should say

What do you want to hear?
Because everything is
Yet isn’t.

© 2010 Revenge<3'sMe


Author's Note

Revenge<3'sMe
This is my view of life. Don't like it or have and rude comments then LEAVE! I don't wanna hear your bull-crap.

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This is plain and simple truth. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, I can't believe I missed this... I give it two thumbs up, Jamie gives it three thumbs! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is a really different perspective to have on life. its refreshing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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