Broken Girl

a rather depressing poem i know.

Torn apart inside
to myself I should never have lied
there is no more hope for me
my life is a waste of time and peace

just let me die
not like you care that I cry
you hate me I might as well accept
Its all my fault I must regret

My heart still burns
because I�m never going to learn
I�m just standing out in the pouring rain
bearing all the pain

standing all alone
now I know I�m on my own
you broke my heart
ripped my world completely apart

why should I go through everyday
living on the words you may never say
paying for my unforgivable mistake
and this is my only escape

so I hold the knife high above my head
I hope you will remember me when I�m dead
goodbye cruel and heartless world
This is the ending chapter of a broken girl

Author's Note

grammatical errors?
what do you think of it over all?

Reviews

[Mariah]

I think it's great. Well, er, it is depressing, a little, but I think it's very strong and powerful.