Falling

I fell alone

Like nothings there

Just the dark

Through thinnest air

 

No one to catch me

No waiting arms

No tight embrace

To keep me warm

 

I feel so numb

So dead and cold

Like life was gone

And death took hold

 

I'm falling still

Through that abyss

Still no one there

Just colder mist

 

The dark gets blacker

Each second passed

Further I fall

When will I rest at last?

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

"No one to catch me

No waiting arms

No tight embrace

To keep me warm"
was my favorite, mainly because I know the feeling, when you can't mess up because no one's there to keep you from falling down.

[Van]

Sometimes all we can do is pick ourselves up once we hit the ground.