MAN AS GOD PART FIVE

MAN AS GOD PART FIVE

A Poem by moonbeam40
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CHANNELLINGS FROM THE COMFORTER

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The next in line, successive fifth,

Gave thought to all preceeding,

The conquest-over time itself,

Accepted dream by sages!!

Gave number five much furious thought,

Was man indeed succeeding?

"Men measure time in ticks of clocks,

In days in years in ages,

And therefore time itself is myth,

Of mans own misconcieving!!

What is the truth? can time, like trains,

Run on,  in man-made gauge,

The fifth man wandered on in thought,

Unheeding, unpercieving,

Till madness came, and his last days,

Were run in future rages.

 

 

© 2011 moonbeam40


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moonbeam40
channellings from the comforter

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The poem open the door to a large discussion. I believe man is weak and the dream of being a God is not possible. Many men have tried to be Gods. History made them look foolish and weak. I believe we are strong as the family support we have. A man with many friends can be dangerous.
"What is the truth? can time, like trains,
Run on in man-made gauge,"
I believe life is simple. Good or bad deeds and accomplishment are what we are. Do nothing and you are nothing. Be kind and helpful. Will know a peaceful journey with many friends. A excellent poem. Made the old Coyote think this morning.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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ESSEX, CLACTON, United Kingdom



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Western zodiac sign Gemini, Eastern Zodiac I am The Metal Dragon. Born June 7th 1940, was evacuated until 1947, when war ended 1945? Born in Hornchurch Essex although I am not in any records? Many st.. more..

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