Like a Swan

I'm missing you

like a swan

without white feathers

without a lake to swim upon.

I remember our glory days

I gazed upon your handsome face

and you showed me the way to love.

Since you went away

I sit here every single day

waiting for you to appear.

And I'm like a ghost in the mirror

throughout the years,

needing you to walk along.

But you're just gone,

no star to wish upon.

Because you sang your swan song.

Reviews

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Again, this is just beautiful. Your writing is so elegant. I admire that and just read your work in awe, at its subtle rawness and soft yet striking tone. Just masterful, my friend.

[iamshadowine]

nice piece of poetry! keep writing :D

[Stan]

Moonbaby, because I'm a swan i had to read your writing.. I liked it very much indeed.,
meaningful, touching... nice piece indeed.