Dancing in the dark...

In the wrong direction

they fly on with the storm.

They take the devil’s outline

as an angel's fantasy form.

 

-Hallucinated by -

energetic,

impatient,

enthusiastic emotions.

 

-Misinterpreting -

a small drop as a cluster of

deep,

calm,

chaste oceans.

 

Loitering around on exactly nowhere enjoying freedom in ignorance’s prison.

 

-Sadness-

will soon surround them

so will,

loneliness

and

depression.

 

And when they realize reality

it will leave a sorrowful,

mournful mark.

 

I pity them,

for they know not,

that they are all dancing in the dark.

 

 

 

Reviews

[lou lou]

this is really good.

[Penny Dreadful]

From this peice i can interpret the issues that much of mankind are doomed towards.

godd write!

xxx

[Mai Aliza]

I like the unique style of stucture in your poem. And I love the poem in itself. Bravo

[Coyote Poetry]

Wisdom in your last line. We can fall into darkness of pity and sadness. We need to come alive and dance in the light. A very good poem.
Coyote

[nostal]

Great Job.

[Cassandra D.]

This was a good poem. You described the feelings very well.
It's interesting and a great poem to read.
I liked it.

[Domo]

Has a great temper and flow to it, and very unique I must say.
Good job.
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