my love my...bestest friend...

I tried to make this into a song so that my friend could make the music to it and it didn't work, ah I failed, but yo can read it any ways...

 

I lost you once

and now again

I lost my love and my best friend

 

 

Didn't I tell you it was true

that since the day we met I've loved you

 

 

It hasn't changed over time

This precious love between you and I

 

 

Your love's the sweet kiss good night

The make-up after a fight.

 

 

Your gourgeous voice as you sing me to sleep

Makes my heart skip a beat

 

 

You call me butterfly

I call you bumble bee

Oh your sweeter than honey to me

 

 

You are my love

You mean my life

now please put down the knife

 

 

Don't hurt yourself

Not again

                 Your my love...my bestest friend...

Author's Note

I spoke out of experience with this one. I'm sorry if it seems weird or if you can't relate, reviews are greatly appreciated so thankyou, and I will be sure to return the favor.

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

i hurt myself and lost my best freind i like this poem its almost what i feel its very good the poem that is

[Suicidal Teddybear]

i love this especially the last part i've had friends who hardmed themselfs and two or three that tried to well worse and .. i just .. love this you are brilliant

[Scarlett Willows]

I really enjoyed this; I used a very similar techneque if you want to checkbout my poem the hate of love and review. (: I liked the meaning and though behind this keep it up

[ebur™]

this was a great poem, and was described very well. the occasional rhyming adding an effect to it. the poem itself was touching :) and was just great and enjoyable to read. awesomeness award! ;)

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

I can totally relate to this poem.
It makes me think of my bestest friend also.
I really liked it. :)

[Jacky Bones]

awww

[Just Charles]

Tender write here. Definitely relatable to those romanticists. It might need a little work, to fully gage the potential emotions.