love? HA!! you make me sick

Brake the pieces that were finally found

HA!

And I thought the ground was low...

Kick me as I bleed

Yea

THAT"S THE WAY TO GO!!

LOVE??

A silly game played my theives

HATE??

A prize to congraulate

The one's not afraid to kiss below the dirt

Staying with you did so much more than hurt

YOU MOCKED MY HEART!!

and all I've got to show for it is

ONE SILLY QUESTION

Was what we had TRUE love or just another lie you convinced yourself of?

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

I loved this form you've captured, quite original and crafty, the messege is heartfelt and
allows the reader to connect, you have talent, keep it up

[Jacky Bones]

it would be fun too hear

[Arthur Crow]

Your presentaion blew me away... I wish more people would experiement like that.
And your words cut deep and bleed so darkly beautiful.

:)