remember the pain?

remember the pain?

A Poem by black_rose_obsession

You were my best friend.

How did i lose you again?

This time it hurts, so much more than the last.

Everything keeps happening too fast for any of us to grasp.

I thought that together we were good

But this time it hurts alot more than it should.

you said you loved me so how could you...

All those words that we said

Do they mean nothing too?

All those words that we said

Are their meanings gone too?

All the dreams we shared together

now, are they really gone forever?

You expect me to turn my cheek

you know me

do YOU think i’m that weak?

To say whatever to the love that we once shared

under the stars

how much we cared

all the cute moments that made me blush

now are gone now and truly im crushed

i am sorry cause I DO LOVE YOU

but together the team we make

makes too much havock for more than 2

trust me keeping this thing going would make us fools

some people get it...

and some don’t

for those who do...

thankyou

and for those who don’t...

I understand

but I myself am merely human.

Not a vampire, not a werewolf

just a human and...

If i’m a human,

and I’m all it took to tear you apart

where is your trust?

where is your heart?

what happened to your faith?

don’t sell your love if you know it’s fake

cause some love is real

and they know how it feels

to lose it when they gave it all they had.

A world without true love will drive ever body mad.

Just watch and see down the drain it goes

your heart is falling

better watch your toes.

Keep your soul safe

for these people it’s never enough,

they hunger and thirst

until they realize

even their not tough enough

to hurt the few,

who even after all the pain and suffering

can take you back and say they love you.

So once again here it is a happy end.

To the story no one once knew.

I pity those that actually do...

but as for me the story ends so sadly

it can’t fend for itself in such a harsh world,

crumbling into pieces

getting so cold

..so...just let me go.

I know it’s not the happy ending we always thought it would be

but i still love you and I know you still love me.

They can punch my face,

and claw at my heart,

but I don’t care,

cause I know they can’t tear you and me apart.

So it’s gunna be okay

..for now..

if this all ends

i’ll make it through somehow

I know i can...

just for you

but something i have to say before i go

its something in my heart barbera deangelis wrote

something every person should know

"The need is not to be on the outside glaring in.

It is to be in the center with you.

To be loved is nice,

but not essential.

To love someone,

that is what makes life worth living.

Keep loving that someone,

no matter who it hurts,

cause trust me in life they’ll learn there’s alot worse...

"

© 2009 black_rose_obsession


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Zak
...that is...heartfelt to the fullest extent. It is long, but that has a purpose. It pours out every feeling that you thought about that person and others who see it from the outside that don't know what it's like to be you or what it is like to understand. The last part just gives it the power and grace...whew. Love it.

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Love is difficult. You captured many important parts of the experience.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it...very heartfelt and although it was longish it showed all the feelings you wanted to put down
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Zak
...that is...heartfelt to the fullest extent. It is long, but that has a purpose. It pours out every feeling that you thought about that person and others who see it from the outside that don't know what it's like to be you or what it is like to understand. The last part just gives it the power and grace...whew. Love it.

ZTM

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. another very powerfully passionate write! Great flow and rhythm.. the overall emotions pouring out are immense.. and touching! Love is so much pain.. but so worth it!!! Thank you for sharing your indepth feelings in a very well written and warm writing! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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