happy

it sounds like a hallmark card

love in their eyes

joy on their face

comfort in their touch

healing in their embrace

the perfect person

brings you to life

you shine from the inside

it's an amazing thing that few can do

but one of those few

is definatially you!!

Reviews

[Ayesha Atif]

Black, it's nicely written. I actually smiled the whole time when I was reading it!
It's beautiful.

[Douglas Bujak]

this is nice has a great beat to it...

i like it.

[Kieran James McGovern]

This it, to me, your best one on here. It shows a good ear for the music of words, and that's what verse is all about. Not necessarily flowery imagery, but rhythm. Keep doing what you're doing and it will be excellent soon.