dime man he's prime

dime man he's prime

A Poem by black_rose_obsession

see there's this guy I met one day

and he's perfect beyond love's ways

every word he says is an absolute rush to my existence

he thinks hes so worthless

he thinks he means nothing

but im trying to be his purpose

im trying to be his something

If i was a drunk then he'd be my drink

If I was the ocean he'd make me sink

If i was a house he'd be my wall

If I was a canyon he's be my fall

but i am a human and he is my love

he is my angel sent from god above

© 2009 black_rose_obsession


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Zak
He he. I love the way that you say what he is to you.
"If I was a drunk he'd be my drink
If I was the ocean he'd make me sink"
Beautiful meaning, too
XD good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Limerence at it's finest. Or at least something like it.

Very nice read.

"he thinks hes so worthless
he thinks he means nothing
but im trying to be his purpose
im trying to be his something"

These lines echo your message so wonderfully.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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halloween town, PA, Turkmenistan



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