I simply love you

I simply love you

A Poem by black_rose_obsession

I love you with a love nothing can undo

break my heart

and I'll love you

Take us back to the start

and I'll love you

hate me

curse me

do your worst to me

it doesn't matter

do you know why?

yes, because I love you

but not just with any love

its with an unconditional love

to the ends of the universe

no matter how bad it hurts

I will still love you

do you get it

I simply love you

© 2009 black_rose_obsession


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This is passionate and artistic, the heartfelt sincerity stands out in a most powerfuly way,
and the reader cant help but feel every word, amazingly done and beautifully expressed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. I broke my girlfriend's heart and she still loves me. I really wish I did not.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simple and powerful.. though love certainly is not simple in reality! I just love the feel and flow of this.. the passion of unconditional love! Superbly done. =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love the vulnerability you show here. its great that the love you're showing in this poem is so utterly unconditional

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Zak
Well. I'm floored by the simplicity of the writing here. I mean, you put it so...heck, I can't even find the words! Love conquers all emotions!
The last statement says all of it
"I simply love you"
Wow.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet poem. Short and to the point about love and loving someone through hurt, hate, pain...anything. Just simply loving someone is enough to go through hell and back for it. Nicely written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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black_rose_obsession

halloween town, PA, Turkmenistan



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Just about loveSep 23, 2009 - Sep 25, 2009In this contest, you can only have one submission of poetry about love. (so make it a good one) It can be has love, weither it's lustful love, the passion of .. more..

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