Red Rose Dead Rose

Red Rose Dead Rose

Red rose was so pretty.

People adore her with their eyes, like she’s some kind of goddess.

They made her feel so special, so beautiful, and oh-so confident.

They made her believe she’s an amazing rose, but all they did was look at how beautiful she is.

However, not a lot of people cared for dead rose.

As beautiful as she was on the inside, people always looked at what’s there.

No one bothered to look inside.

Look inside to see the beauty it holds, the amazing laughs it used to have.

Dead rose was hurt, she was damaged.

People walked past her like she wasn’t even there.

Everyday she goes through the same routine, over and over.. until someone noticed her.

He noticed her beauty as damaged as she was.

He wanted to take a look inside, he wanted to know her.

He slowly started to realize that dead rose is becoming happier, and more joyful.

She started to smile, and open up more.

Little by little dead rose recovered to being the old her.

Author's Note

i'm just starting to write. i'm not sure how my work is, so please feel free to give me notes.

Reviews

[Gina]

This is describing EXACTLY what I am going through right now. I came across this and I couldn't believe it. I though it might be a coincidence but wow this is the most beautiful thing... Finding something that you can relate to. I loved your piece. It was AMAZING just impeccable. Your work is captivating because I could just feel the passion within your words. Keep it up!

[moody]

i'm glad you could relate to the poem! thanks

[Gina]

No problem, anytime!

[APOORVA]

another superb piece.
well done mate.

[moody]

Thank you, so very much

[Ashe Conten]

I lovely piece of poetry. I love it, you have a lot of talent. Keep writing!

[moody]

you have no idea how much that means to me, thank you!

[Ashe Conten]

Your welcome! Let me know if you upload something you think I'd like, I love reading poems just as much as I like writing them

[moody]

most definitely!