Last days

Death finally embraces morning.
Sunshine disperses along with the murk.

Moving towards silver lining while trading-
Love for loneliness,
Life for loss,
Smile for suffocation,
Hope for havoc,
And
Sanity for suicide.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Twists. I was thinking. Good poem

[likhon]

Quite dystopian! loved it

[Lisasview]

My first read of yours and I did enjoy it. I always enjoy poems full of planned or unplanned metaphors... Unplanned always being the best. I find that these types of poems pushes the reader to think outside the box...to actually wonder and think about the meaning...
The poem itself is interesting and leads to a zillion interpretations...
Engaging and provocative is always a delight to read.
I especially like the usage of the same letters.. L~ S ~ H and then S again... clever...
Lisasview

[Fabian G. Franklin]

So much turmoil in the world today and the powers that be keep inflicting it upon all of us. The term "Common Sense" should be changed to uncommon sense to reflect the rarity of realists in the world today. I enjoyed the read. F.