Last days

Last days

A Poem by moog-drika

Death finally embraces morning.
Sunshine disperses along with the murk.

Moving towards silver lining while trading-
Love for loneliness,
Life for loss,
Smile for suffocation,
Hope for havoc,
And
Sanity for suicide.

© 2024 moog-drika


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Powerful dance of thoughts my friend. The words very hard and so true. The world isn't tender no-more. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


Twists. I was thinking. Good poem

Posted 1 Month Ago


Quite dystopian! loved it

Posted 1 Month Ago


My first read of yours and I did enjoy it. I always enjoy poems full of planned or unplanned metaphors... Unplanned always being the best. I find that these types of poems pushes the reader to think outside the box...to actually wonder and think about the meaning...
The poem itself is interesting and leads to a zillion interpretations...
Engaging and provocative is always a delight to read.
I especially like the usage of the same letters.. L~ S ~ H and then S again... clever...
Lisasview

Posted 1 Month Ago


So much turmoil in the world today and the powers that be keep inflicting it upon all of us. The term "Common Sense" should be changed to uncommon sense to reflect the rarity of realists in the world today. I enjoyed the read. F.

Posted 1 Month Ago



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moog-drika
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Hey this is Mugdha, a thought poker, a life giver of words. I'm mostly into dark poetry and have a great appetite for reviving inanimate souls. I think they love me for this gesture but that's my pa.. more..

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