Scribble

Another careless piece

I won't suggest you love me
for my cosmos looks gorgeous to you.
It's just a vivid skin
over a costly vacuum.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is what's inside that counts...and the speaker is saying, even inside there is nothing.
Just this poem itself shows us differently....she is caught in her own thoughts, but very much
has a loving insides and gorgeous on the inside stands the test.
j,

[moog-drika]

Paradox of thoughts makes us a paradox.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.