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A Poem by moog-drika
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Another careless piece

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I won't suggest you love me
for my cosmos looks gorgeous to you.
It's just a vivid skin
over a costly vacuum.

© 2023 moog-drika


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This reminded me of a quote from Marilyn Monroe who said, " Sometimes I feel like one of those Chinese dragons in the New Year parade, you know? All pretty frills and color on the outside but empty inside." Great read...short but powerful. F.

Posted 9 Months Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

The quote I guess came from all the sufferings she had to go through. Sadly, most people are still l.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Month Ago

I really liked this poem because it challenges the superfluous layers of decoration (make-up, jewelr.. read more
awe, this ones great, love it

Posted 10 Months Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much. :D
Powerful way of expressing through minimum lines. Good work

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot. :D
Short but impactful! Loved it.
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much. :D
Mk.t.g

1 Month Ago

Your Welcome!!
Superb words and lines that cross the thoughts so memorably

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Thanks a bunch for all the positive sprinkles. Made my day.:'D
I adored the honest words dear Poet. When we dance into love. Can win, can lose. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did enjoy this one.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the compliment. It really means a lot.
And yes, dancing into love can .. read more
If you love me beautiful. If not I'm still a star. Your lines have plenty of attitude. Nice work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Probably it needed some sprinkles of good attitude to make it sound stronger. Thanks a bunch for the.. read more
I believe I can relate to these words. So eloquent and well said.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for all the positive words. Made my day.:D
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

:D........
This was a splendid poem.
The allure of beauty, the feeling of love, the discovery of inner vacuum
Wowzy woooo!

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Beware! The vacuum is gorgeous but costly :3
Thanks a bunch :'D
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

So true and well said. It is worth it. You are welcome.
What is underneath this vivid is a vacuum…..nothing at all…which is usually the opposite of what we think…that it’s the inside that matters…clever piece…
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

I still don't know whether this nothing is a good thing or bad.
Thanks so much for the posit.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!
Warmly, B

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Added on July 23, 2023
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